Wow. Your story was truly moving. The way you kept the readers from knowing the person was truly the occupant of that tomb was inspiring. I loved the way you made the girl seem angry and sad. One day you will be a talented author and I look forward to reading more of your works.

beautiful your a very talinted writer

this is a really brilliant, well thought out story that deserves to be seen by the wrold... absoultley wonderful!

wow that is really cool i loved the story.. .where did u think of it..?

This story was reall good! did you write that poem?? it was great.