Gallery of Pain: A Lonely Cry Reviews
Reviews for A Lonely Cry
| Denise | August 16, 2005 00:38:18 |
Thats a good poem. Every word I understood. |
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| August 16, 2006 08:37:54 | |
it was very good you showed my pain through words i couldn't speak thank you |
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| T,T | August 16, 2006 08:37:54 |
*goose bumps* It's wonderful, really. |
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| March 5, 2006 03:01:40 | |
Man I konw how you feel. |
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| December 7, 2004 02:54:58 | |
this is a great poem. And as i read it my eyes filled with tears and i realized that every word mentioned in this is exactly how i feel. To whoever wrote this, youre not alone... |
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| Jamie_loves_tdg | May 20, 2008 04:57:51 |
Alone, Alone with a razor. Being in control; I know what will happen next. Put the cold metal against my pale skin. Press, as the pain rushes, Drag, going deeper. And deeper. Still deeper. Creation of scars More cuts Cutting away at dead flesh tearing my life apart. Is this really me? just cutting away again? cutting away torn feelings torn veins. I've found the blood that empties tears as it trickles. I know my way through this with my ironic little coping twist. |
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