the truth in the story. and the intensity of feeling. is the way so many veiw everything wrong in the world. if it does not directly affect them then it is no problem at all. i think. the world should take notice.

that was really good. hmm, what else? i dun know, the describtiona and imagery were excellent and the writng was nothing spectualar, but worked out well witht the story. sad though, but that's all right. very good story.

I have to admit that I thought that this was going to be another childish cliche. But, I'm glad to see that I was wrong. This was a great story. Well, sad, really. I felt like I was right there in the story. I felt like the girl in between. It's like I wanted to say "David, help her." I felt like I should also be saying, "girl you better ask for help". Then, she disapperas. Now, it's like David's life is full of heartache. He just committed homocide and he easily got away with it.